Talk:Joe Johnson (snooker player)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MaxnaCarta (talk · contribs) 05:46, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

General comments
Lead
 * Added "The British"
 * Removed hyphen from "quarterfinals"
 * Linked English to England

Early life
 * two commas added
 * Johnson was National to Johnson was the National
 * and three times Yorkshire Champion changed to and a three-time Yorkshire Champion

Early years
 * Capitalised championship
 * Hyphen to 100-break added
 * Removed comma
 * Hyphen to "last-16" added

1982
 * Fixed spelling of opening
 * Johnson recorded 10–0 whitewash changed to Johnson recorded a 10–0 whitewash

Thanks for those,. MOS:SNOOKER (yes, there is one!) says that there should be a hyphen in quarter-finals, so am I OK to amend those? BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:12, 30 August 2023 (UTC)


 * I'll put the hyphens back, sorry for that! — MaxnaCarta  ( 💬 • 📝 ) 02:36, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I've done another copyedit, replacing those hyphens and adding some commas. Advantage was also misspelled so I fixed that. Other than those, this now meets the core criteria for GA and so I will pass. — MaxnaCarta  ( 💬 • 📝 ) 02:41, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

Spot Checks

 * [20] - I mean, not quite. It does not confirm he was inside the 1983 masters; rather, the reference confirms he was not within the eight-player group. However, this is not a controversial fact. The linked article confirms he was within the 1983 masters, so this is fine.
 * I've added a source (and tweaked the text from "eight" to "six"). I've also wikilinked sources where I could, and added a few extra clipppings. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:13, 30 August 2023 (UTC)


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 * [42c] - (Impressive, the article used the exact adjective of "attacking", I love this source-text integrity
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