Talk:Joe Malone/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 14:32, 26 January 2024 (UTC)

Hello! My name is GhostRiver, and I'll be conducting this GA review. I will assess the article against the good article criteria. Once I complete my review, you will have seven days to implement the suggested edits.

Personal life

 * Comma after During the First World War
 * Comma after After his playing career
 * Link "heart attack" to Myocardial infarction

Legacy

 * Specify how many goals Richard scored that season
 * The "only player to have multiple six-goal games" stat needs a date qualifier. Source is from 2018, so probably "as of 2018"
 * When was he inducted into Canada's Sports Hall of Fame?
 * The statue pays homage to Malone's nickname, "Phantom Joe" How so?
 * Per MOS:LQ, ""Phantom Joe."" ""Phantom Joe"."

Career statistics

 * Good

General comments

 * No stability concerns, and as the subject has been dead for over 50 years, there are unlikely to be
 * Photos are either public domain or CC and are relevant to the article
 * Per MOS:CAPTION, unless a caption is a full sentence, there should not be a period at the end of it
 * Add "|upright=yes" to the last two photos
 * , as the nominator appears to be inactive, if the article does not meet the GA criteria, I would recommend failing this review. &#126;~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:25, 18 March 2024 (UTC)