Talk:Joel Bach/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 14:42, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I will review this article due to the ongoing GAN backlog. --Vacant0 (talk) 14:42, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

General

 * Infobox: Birth date is unsourced.
 * Unused parameters can be deleted.
 * Occupation: "Journalist, film and television producer" → "Journalist · film and television producer"
 * Years active: 1991-present → 1991–present
 * Remove break tags and implement the template; eg. 60 Minutes

Years of Living Dangerously (also goes for notable_works)
 * Unlink "Years of Living Dangerously" at the Notable works parameter since one wl is already present above
 * Footnotes are not needed since the information seems to be sourced below in the text.
 * Optional: add below the SD template.
 * Early life and education:
 * "He created the short film, Brown Is Green, intended to educate..." → "He created a short film named Brown Is Green, which was intended to educate..."
 * Gelber → David Gelber; this is the first time he gets mentioned in the text excluding the lede, it should be changed to his full name.
 * Journalism career:
 * Unlink short films, climate change.
 * Wikilink feature film.
 * Quote: "he’d" and "‘Absolutely.’" → "he'd" and "'Absolutely'"
 * "He seemed to perk up when this issue came across his lap We" → add a dot between lap and We, as seen in the source.
 * There seems to be a sudden stop after the second season, which seemed to have aired 6 years ago, is there more info about Bach's present career, from 2016 to now on?
 * His project seems to be still active up to this day.
 * It should be also mentioned in the text that it had ended in 2016.
 * Filmography: "2004-2011" → 2004–2011; "2014-2016" → 2014–2016
 * Lede: Refs are not needed since the content is already cited below in the text, per MOS:LEADCITE.
 * Another paragraph will be needed since it has more than 30,000 characters, per MOS:LEADLENGTH.

Images

 * None, although it would be great to include at least one.