Talk:Joey Terrill

Peer Review
Hi, I don't know if we're supposed to peer review, but I'm gonna do this just in case!

- I believe the word "queer" stays lowercase!

- There are a couple unnecessary commas

- "where he create friendships" --> "where he created friendships"

- Standard title for art is "Notable art"

- Some other quick grammar fixes

- More references would increase your chance of having the article be published!

- Great work :) Looking forward to reading the complete article!

Drgnwire (talk) 09:21, 8 March 2023 (UTC)

Wiki Education assignment: Queer Arts
— Assignment last updated by Apocsynth (talk) 21:43, 23 March 2023 (UTC)