Talk:Johan Hambro/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk)  20:15, 15 May 2011 (UTC)

Placing article on hold. Arsenikk (talk)  20:15, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Comments:
 * The fourth paragraph in the biography section is too short to be on its own.
 * Is really an obituary the place to find something subjective about someone? Who isn't described as a "warm and including person" in their obituary?
 * The text both says he died on 27 February and 4 March. Also, did it really go three months from his death to his funeral?
 * 'Uranienborg' is a disambig link.
 * Thank you for the review. I think I have fixed most of these things now. As for his funeral, the only source I could find for that, was his entry in the DIS-Norge database, so I simply removed the line on his funeral. Unfortunately, they're not always having the correct dates&hellip; -- Eisfbnore talk 07:03, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Congratulations with a good article. Arsenikk (talk)  09:10, 16 May 2011 (UTC)