Talk:Johan Neerman

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If you are good in creating Wikipedia articles help me to improve an article about Johan Neerman. Thank you ahead! Your help will be the most appriciated! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tanya Nelson (talk • contribs)
 * Association with Nobel Prize Ilya Prigogine and other academic figures is not substantiated at all; "Studied at Wharton" is ambiguous but this person does not figure in the Alumni list; Examination of some of the linked articles shows only passing mention of his name, far from making him a notable inventor; Reference to 'Low-draft ferry boat for Royal denship in Denmark in 2000' is ambiguous as it is unclear if this ship actually exists or if this is a reference to an unpublished design or concept. Previous version of this article included the sentence 'Neerman has written numerous publications in the field of architecture and design' without any actual bibliographical referenceItalic text (printed 13/12/2012). Sentence has been removed since then but these elements raise many doubts about the 'notability' of this person. They may rather indicate that this entry is a self-promoting CV under the guise of a Wikipedia article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Benadampapa (talk • contribs)

If you read the article attentively you will understand that it provides the early biography background of the person that designed the most advanced transport systems in Europe that are currently in use worldwide. It would be appreciated if you could make a distinction between early life, background and references. That is how the page is being structured. Your referral regarding Ilya Prigogine is just a biographical fact to tell more details of the background and early life of the individual. In the referencing of the article you will find all necessary sources to each sentence in the article. Taking into account that the best amount of transport systems were designed in eighties and nineties I listed only the most published ones from book publications, journals, editions talking about Johan Neerman work. Article considered to be of a high degree of significance and distinction’. If you could provide more insight to provide reader with even more data on Johan Neerman and his work I would appreciate it.  Julia Williams123 

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See Commons:Commons:Administrators'_noticeboard/User_problems too. Andy Dingley (talk) 19:52, 10 October 2023 (UTC)