Talk:Johann Christian Ritter/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Buchraeumer (talk) 15:24, 30 August 2010 (UTC)

I am sorry to have to fail this article for the obvious reason that it is hardly more than a stub.


 * Article consists only of lead, please read carefully WP:LEAD; Article development might also be useful.


 * Though the article has a few citations, statements like the one that an alternative birthplace may have been Hof an der Saale would still need a citation, for example.


 * Some strange grammar and too few commas.


 * Article content needs organizing. That he may have been born in Hof appears in the midst of material completely unrelated, for example.


 * Article history: first edit summary was: "Created new page to change title, old page to be deleted", please MOVE articles in such cases, to preserve the article's editing history. WP:MOVE