Talk:Johann Joseph Dömling/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 21:26, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Esculenta (talk · contribs) 20:46, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Hi, I'll review this. Hope to have comments here within a couple of days. Esculenta (talk) 20:46, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Here are my comments. The article looks to be in good shape and is based on solid sources. Much of the following commentary tries to tease out some extra details, but I understand that the sources might be limited in this respect.
 * Thank you very much for the detailed feedback! I'll get started with some of the easier bits and hope to finish by the weekend. —Kusma (talk) 22:25, 18 July 2024 (UTC)

Lead
 * The lead could be expanded to provide a bit more context about Dömling's significance in the field of medicine and his contributions to physiology.
 * to do
 * link Romantic, typhoid fever, pneumonia
 * endogeneous -> endogenous (+ later as well)
 * Done the others.

Early life and education
 * possibly useful links: Bavaria, boarding school, Hamburg, naval surgeon
 * Bavaria is just a rough indication of where this is; I don't want to link to the modern state because actually, the town was in the Prince-Bishopric of Würzburg. Perhaps I'll need to clarify that? Expanded Bavaria/PB of Würzburg. Added the others.
 * "Dömling first attended the village school in Merkershausen and then learned some Latin in the nearby Bad Königshofen." sentence is ... odd
 * Rephrased a bit.
 * Clarify financial support; was is usual for Franz Ludwig von Erthal to sponsor "gifted but impoverished students"? Please link the unusual term "prince-bishop" (which might also need capitalization?); I note there's the specific link Prince-Bishopric of Würzburg, which applies to von Erthal.
 * Any more context about the educational environment at the Juliusspital and the University of Würzburg?
 * What are you looking for? The university was (as far as I know) a fairly standard Catholic university.
 * "As a medical student, he assisted" subject of "he" a bit unclear
 * Improved?
 * While the article mentions his work on carbon monoxide in blood, it could benefit from more specifics about his other research findings and their impact on the field of physiology.
 * The difficulty is that most of the research about Dömling is Gerabek's work that places him in the context of Schelling and Döllinger but says nothing about carbon monoxide. I have not been able to find anything much about Dömling and carbon monoxide from before 2020.
 * "The main topic of the thesis is the" is->was
 * Done.

Academic career
 * links: Göttingen, Prague, Dresden, Leipzig, Jena, pathology
 * capitalize policlinic?
 * The article states that Dömling was popular with students, but it doesn't explain why. Any info about his teaching methods or any innovative approaches he used?
 * any more information about the significance of his interactions with other scholars and how they influenced his work?

Medical philosophy, research, and ppublications
 * link empirical research, oxidised, carbon dioxide
 * Explain why his opposition to humorism was significant at the time. For example, the statement "he denied that the liver had a purifying function." is interesting statement, but I think needs understanding of contemporary medical context to fully understand. It would be useful to clarify what exactly Dömling meant by denying the liver's "purifying" function, Explain the prevailing beliefs about liver function at the time, and briefly mention how our understanding of liver function has evolved since then. This would provide a more nuanced understanding of Dömling's position and its significance in the history of medical knowledge.
 * If possible, provide more detailed analysis or summaries of his major works.
 * "Dömling originally supported a mechanistic physiology." what does this mean (in layperson's terms)?
 * What was the impact of his findings on carbon monoxide in human blood and how did it influenced subsequent research?

Death and aftermath
 * Any more context for why a fake letter blaming Horsch for Dömling's death was published. What was the motivation behind it, and how was it received by the public or medical community?
 * Succession: Mention any contributions Ignaz Döllinger made after succeeding Dömling, if relevant.
 * link chair

Works
 * are these all of his works?
 * translated titles would be nice (but not GA necessary)


 * I noticed isn't used as a source; perhaps the content is equivalent to Gerabek 1995?
 * I expect there is not much in that paper that isn't in Gerabek's other publications; this version has zero citations and the "Würzburgwiki" author seems to have used it and not found anything additional to what I have.
 * is that external link of any real value? I don't see anything in that less detailed article that isn't already in the English article
 * It was a leftover from before I expanded the article, gone now.