Talk:John A. Roush/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 02:25, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Harper J. Cole (talk · contribs) 17:59, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

I'll take on this review. --Harper J. Cole (talk) 17:59, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

Comments
--Harper J. Cole (talk) 23:46, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Four commas in this sentence feels a bit excessive. I think you could take out the second and third commas and the meaning would still be clear.
 * Removed. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 13:44, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
 * No need for a comma before "respectively".
 * Removed. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 13:44, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
 * You've used the "CURRENTYEAR" variable in the "as of" tag. Going by As of, these shouldn't be mixed.
 * Changed. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 13:44, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
 * What does "sequence" mean in this context? We could do with a translation of the Latin phrase, as well.
 * Tried to clarify that it is a sequence of courses and added translation. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 13:44, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
 * I think it's fine to mention the debates, as they were major events during Roush's tenure, but this line is getting a bit off topic. It's might be better placed in a general history of the college.
 * Removed. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 13:44, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
 * It seems like the length of term for Spragens should be stated, rather than when he left office, as this is a comparison of the longest tenures.
 * Good point, changed. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 13:44, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Wikilink endowed professorships
 * Wikilink scholarship when first used.
 * Wikilink computational sciences, natural sciences and economics
 * Wikilink stock.
 * Wikilink convocation when first used.
 * Linked all.


 * @Harper J. Cole Thank you for the review! Everything has been changed or responded to above. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 13:44, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Looking good - I shall promote. Harper J. Cole (talk) 18:47, 19 April 2024 (UTC)