Talk:John Allen (RAF officer)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 22:57, 26 December 2023 (UTC)

Prelim

 * Article is stable
 * Images correctly licensed
 * No duplicated links
 * Earwig reports copyvio unlikely

Lede and infobox

 * Link Second World War
 * Linked in both places, you may have overlooked the one in the lead. Zawed (talk) 03:42, 27 December 2023 (UTC)


 * Link sortie
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:42, 27 December 2023 (UTC)


 * Infobox says he was born on 2 July
 * Oops, that was a typo. Zawed (talk) 03:42, 27 December 2023 (UTC)

Early life

 * Is Laurance a spelling error?
 * I did a doublecheck on this when writing the article because, like you, I thought it was a typo but all sources I have with his middle name spell it that way. Zawed (talk) 03:44, 27 December 2023 (UTC)

Second World War

 * Link Second World War
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)


 * "From mid-May" give the year
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)


 * Give Deere his rank
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)


 * "Messerschmitt Bf 109s fighters" sp
 * Fixed. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)


 * "the destruction of which was observed"
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)


 * Link bail out
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)


 * Link scrambled
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)


 * "Allen is buried"
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)