Talk:John Baldwin (educator)/GA1

GA Reassessment
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This article has been reviewed as part of WikiProject Good articles/Project quality task force in an effort to ensure all listed Good articles continue to meet the Good article criteria. In reviewing the article, I have found there are some issues that may need to be addressed, listed below. I will check back in seven days. If these issues are addressed, the article will remain listed as a Good article. Otherwise, it may be delisted (such a decision may be challenged through WP:GAR). If improved after it has been delisted, it may be nominated at WP:GAN. Feel free to drop a message on my talk page if you have any questions, and many thanks for all the hard work that has gone into this article thus far. Ruslik_ Zero 15:28, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) The lead of the article does not satisfy WP:LEAD. The second paragraph is just a replica of the first. Please, wright a new lead of apprppriate length. In addition, which would eventually merge into Baldwin-Wallace College. is not mentioned in the main text.
 * 2) he joined the Methodist Church, whose influence led him through the academy What academy?


 * I'll fix point 1 in a couple days. As for point 2, I'm not sure which academy, since unfortunately I don't have the sources on me at this time, and won't for another couple months. Wizardman  15:03, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Rewrote the lead. Wizardman  15:13, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Can the academy be a military academy? Ruslik_ Zero 07:55, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Based on my research, it's possible but unlikely, since he didn't seem like the military type. I imagine academy = private school, so I'll reword. Wizardman  20:38, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Passed. Ruslik_ Zero 09:14, 6 July 2009 (UTC)