Talk:John Bartlett Angel

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Suggestions to improve article structure
This article on John Bartlett Angel does not contain any subsections, but rather denotes his accomplishments by stating, "These are some of the other accomplishments and awards that Angel has received". Secondly, the lead section does not provide an easy to follow overview of what is to come in the rest of the article. To improve such an article, one should provide more structure by creating subheadings (such as history, accomplishment, early family life, etc.), and creating a stronger lead section, rather than one sentence that attempts to reveal several of his accomplishments. A helpful site that could help improve upon this article is the Wikipedia Help/Edit Page. .