Talk:John Challen/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 22:43, 2 March 2018 (UTC)

I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 22:43, 2 March 2018 (UTC)

Didn't even realize I tagged this a week ago, wow. Anyway, here's what I found:
 * CricketArchive's behind a paywall as well it looks like, so all those should probably be tagged as sub required.
 * " of schools across the south of England." I'd trim it to "..across southern England" but that's more personal preference than anything.
 * "Challen scored his team's highest score in" having score right after each other feels a bit odd, i'd reword.
 * "in the following match; against second-class Devon." rm semicolon

Only a few small things; I'll put the article on hold and will pass when fixed. Wizardman 16:47, 10 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review . All done. Harrias  talk 19:35, 10 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good, article passes. Wizardman  14:50, 17 March 2018 (UTC)