Talk:John Cotton Richmond

Reads like a resume
The biography manual of style advised that events should usually be presented in chronological order from birth to death. This article currently reads like a resume or professional profile because the most recent events are presented first, which is not appropriate. Why write the article that way? - Cameron Dewe (talk) 07:04, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
 * I think flipping the article into chronological order would make sense and would improve the article’s quality. The reason for my accepting it was because this is a notable person and the article did not appear to me to be overtly advertorial. Formatting can and should be improved to make it more encyclopedic. — Mikehawk10 (talk) 20:32, 15 November 2021 (UTC)