Talk:John David Duty

I am confused...what is special is not the lede
Already this article needs to be rewritten.

1. What is notable about that lede? A convicted killer is sentenced to death for killing another inmate? And? What is notable about that? Nothing.

2. However the notability is contained in the second paragraph where it is said that he is the first person to be put to death in the US with animal tranqs.

So basically the intro needs a complete rewrite. The only thing notable about this killer is the manner of his death, not his tragic life story. Needs to be done again.109.155.75.2 (talk) 22:29, 8 February 2011 (UTC)


 * Fair enough. The lead section has been completely reorganized, incorporating some of your suggestions. KimChee (talk) 04:21, 9 February 2011 (UTC)