Talk:John Doggett/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sanguis Sanies (talk) 14:34, 26 November 2009 (UTC)

Greetings! I've previously reviewed Jeffrey Spender and as there is a rather large backlog under Film and Television I thought I'd help out and review some more.

Lead
Infobox: affiliated with: the X-files should probably lead to The X-Files rather than to x-file
 * ✅ Sanguis Sanies (talk) 06:25, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

Character arc
Should have much more CITEs, each claim should have the episode it was referenced in as a CITE.

Do we really need his service no.?
 * ✅ Sanguis Sanies (talk) 06:25, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

✅ paragraph three and four both seem to repeat each other and should probably be merged into one (well referenced) paragraph.
 * . There are only three pharagraphs? --TIAYN (talk) 07:02, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Really? I see four; para 1 starts with "Doggett served in the United States Marine Corps", para 2 starts with "In 1995, Doggett graduated", para 3 starts with "Initially, Scully and Doggett " and para 4 starts with "Doggett and his new partner," I think that three and four can still be merged.
 * Sorry, my fault!

✅ The final sentence should probably be dropped, it makes it sound as though he's disappeared, and (from memory) I Want to Believe makes no mention of him so isn't really a good source for that sentence.

Conceptual history
✅ "More than a hundred actors" and should use to support that claim.

✅ doesn't support the claim that "Lou Diamond Phillips and Hart Bochner" both auditioned for the part. Can another CITE be found? If not the claim should be removed.

✅ "In an interview Chris Carter said" it's the first mention of Chris Carter in the article and should have his full name.

✅ "the show was shooting its pilot episode entitled L.A. Sheriff's Homicide" Was that the name of the show or the name of the pilot episode? If it was the name of the pilot what was the show called?

✅ "Carter had previously named" that sentence also needs a CITE.

Reception
✅ I've added a who? tag to the claim "Some fans". The sentence also needs a CITE.

✅ "saying "everybody likes Robert Patrick and the character," " is a direct quote and needs a CITE.