Talk:John Evelyn Duigan

Assessment
The article has all the essentials for B-class. However, the 2-sentence lead paragraph is short for a B-class article. The summary is normally up to 4 paragraphs, depending on the length of the article. But since this article is brief, 1 paragraph of several sentences should do the trick. If it were up to me, I'd add 1 sentence each for Boer War, WW1, and how he riled people as CGS. Djmaschek (talk) 02:54, 14 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. Thanks for the feedback. Zawed (talk) 05:00, 14 February 2013 (UTC)