Talk:John F. Tierney/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: -- Cirt (talk) 19:41, 21 December 2010 (UTC)
 * I will review this article. -- Cirt (talk) 19:41, 21 December 2010 (UTC)

Since it's been over a month, I'll review this article in the next few days. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 06:15, 22 January 2011 (UTC)

To start things off, Ref #25 (White House veto threat) is a deadlink. Fix that while I go over the prose. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:26, 27 January 2011 (UTC)


 * Is somebody actually handling this? AGK  [&bull; ] 17:28, 30 January 2011 (UTC)
 * The editor's still active, and I got swamped on multiple fronts, so only getting to it now. Here are the prose issues with the article:


 * For references, page numbers should be included where applicable. for example, ref #27 (stepson arrested) should have B5 added.
 * isolated single-digit numbers should be written out, i.e. "4 percentage points" should be 'four percentage points'.

Just a few issues, so I'll put the article on hold for five days and pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:44, 31 January 2011 (UTC)
 * The article looks better now, and since the issues are fixed I'll pass it as a GA. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 04:11, 2 February 2011 (UTC)