Talk:John Foulds/GA1

GA on hold
A few notes... Leave me a note on my talk page when you've done this stuff. Dihydrogen  Monoxide  08:09, 8 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Image:JohnFoulds.jpg - Copyright owner is probably the newspaper that printed it...
 * I'd like to see more sourcing, if possible. At the same time, I see how this could be an issue.  At the very least, could you please inline cite the stuff in the "References" section - eg. say what facts in the article you got from those books, etc.  That's the main thing before I pass this.
 * "Incidental music for plays" - What does this mean?
 * "Personal life" and "Legacy" sections need refs (books aforementioned?)

The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question. You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Dihydrogen   Monoxide  08:09, 8 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “ All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]


 * As very few of the requested changes have taken place, I've had to fail the article. Dihydrogen   Monoxide  03:00, 16 November 2007 (UTC)


 * Sorry, was very busy over the last few days and didn't have time to work on the article. Thanks for your suggestions; will renominate the article after I (or other editors) have had a chance to edit it. &mdash; Cheers, Jack Lee  –talk– 05:52, 16 November 2007 (UTC)