Talk:John Fresshe/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 14:03, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

I'll start this in the next couple of days. auntieruth (talk) 14:03, 27 June 2018 (UTC)
 * he also used them as his agents in Calais to further his wool trading, as Walderne did in 1388....Walderne furthered his own wool trade or acted as agent for Fresshe?
 * minor text hiccups here. Please review....
 * I don't understand the caption under the first image.
 * please clarify why you think an info box would be too political for this man? auntieruth (talk) 20:02, 27 June 2018 (UTC)


 * If I may take your four points in order.
 * I have clarified, I think, now, that Waldern was an apprentice being employed in such a scheme?
 * I have reviewed your copyedits; they are, as ever, excellent.
 * I have tweaked, added links, and hopefully, improved generally the caption under the first image.
 * I think—not.
 * Thanks for the review—hope all's well, as usual. —SerialNumber54129  paranoia / cheap sh*t room 19:29, 4 August 2018 (UTC)

Excellent work- pass AmericanAir88 (talk) 17:19, 20 August 2018 (UTC)