Talk:John Hastings, 2nd Earl of Pembroke/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 16:27, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  16:27, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (14.5% is highest, due to incidental mirroring of a few phrases.)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅
 * Images appropriately licensed ✅
 * Passing now, will add prose suggestions at a later date. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  14:54, 28 February 2018 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions

 * apparently under the nose of a local French commander suggest apparently escaping the notice of a local French commander
 * as Jonathon Sumption put it, Pembroke "may have had the grander name but his inexperience showed suggest linking Jonathan Sumption.
 * That is all my suggestions. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  13:51, 5 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Many Thanks again,, good advice as ever, and all taken. Take care!  ...SerialNumber  54129 ...speculates 14:22, 5 March 2018 (UTC)