Talk:John Hemmingham/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 06:37, 6 April 2013 (UTC)


 * The lead should have some content from every section.
 * "first started in football governance" - needs some copy-edit.
 * "independent supporters group" -> "an independent supporters group"
 * There is hardly any information about his personal life.
 * No ref has been provided for his birthday.
 * Was already in one of the external links but added as a ref.
 * The refs should not be written in all caps even if it is done in the source.
 * Try to see if you can get any free-licensed image.
 * I have searched for one but unfortunately I can't find one.

Will try to locate any other possible error. Anyhow the article seems to be good with lead being the only major problem. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 06:37, 6 April 2013 (UTC)
 * I've responded to your concerns.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 07:29, 6 April 2013 (UTC)

Some more comments
 * There is no source for birth-place in the infobox.
 * No source for his other name "hema" in the infobox.. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛  Talk Email 07:38, 6 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Done those.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 07:49, 6 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Article passed ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛  Talk Email 07:54, 6 April 2013 (UTC)