Talk:John Henry Bufford

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Hi Henry. I peer reviewed your article. I think you should organize your contents box by shortening the biography, adding a section for his work and how he became so famous. I also added a few of the "citations needed." Your article sounds really good though. Just re-arrange some of the information so that it is in time order from his early life to now. M01022011 (talk) 00:40, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Just to note that the page has not actually been edited yet, so M010 has given you a place to start your work from. Jump to it. --Theredproject (talk) 00:45, 16 November 2011 (UTC)

Peer edit
I absolutely agree with the fact that you do need to organize your article a lot better. It one huge paragraph that could be broken down into many different sub topics once they are elaborated on. Your formation of sentences and ideas are there, but we need more. Fortunately you do have photo's, which will definatley help you out in the end for your presentation. --Fi89419 (talk) 04:10, 22 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Also, the section you added is mostly about Pendleton. The paragraph you added starts out with a "John Henry Bufford was an American lithographer in the 19th century. Mr. Bufford trained in a Boston studio called Pendleton’s Lithography from 1829-1831" making it seem like you copied the article (or paraphrased in full) from another article. You must cite your sources and integrate this article more completely in order to pass muster.--163.238.70.28 (talk) 21:41, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

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