Talk:John Hines (Australian soldier)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk) 10:32, 17 July 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments
No disambiguation links A good read and fits the stereotype of an Aussie Digger to a T. Jim Sweeney (talk) 10:32, 17 July 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) The External links section is empty so can be deleted unless you plan adding something there.
 * It contains a link to a spoken version of the article, and according to WikiProject Spoken Wikipedia/Template guidelines this is where such links need to be placed. This seems a bit odd to me, but I presume that spoken word articles are intended to assist sight impaired readers, so it's best that links to them are in a consistent location in articles.
 * 1) The web site Kelly, Darryl. "Just Soldiers". ANZAC Day Commemoration Committee of Queensland Incorporated. http://www.anzacday.org.au/justsoldiers/justsoldiers.html. needs an access date added
 * Done
 * 1) Citation 14 E00822 for consistency should be Collection. Australian War Memorial or the other website links changed to the article title.
 * That's the name of the website (which is an item within the AWM's collection database) and appears to be consistent with the other AWM links
 * 1) I presume it's not know how he was medically unfit when discharged in 1916?
 * Unfortunately not. The only record of this is his army personnel file, which simply states 'discharged medically unfit' on 20 January 1916.
 * Thanks Jim. Nick-D (talk) 11:00, 17 July 2011 (UTC)