Talk:John Hines (radio broadcaster)

Tone
I have flagged this article for tone. The language is not what we expect in an encyclopedia article. Some examples:


 * "radio broadcaster known for being a disc jockey and talk-show host": why being known?  he is a "broadcaster, disk jockey, and talk show host" would suffice
 * "lasting 13 months, three weeks, four days and 37 minutes before quickly . . ." why the precision? This appears to be a direct quote, and must be marked as such.
 * "career began to skyrocket" hyperbole
 * "gaffing wowed audiences" slang, hyperbole, ad-speak
 * "young upstart"
 * "magical pairing" really??
 * "no one out hustled"
 * "was quickly snatched up"
 * "quickly capitpolting" misspelled, and poor analogy
 * " star power" and how is that measured?

This article needs a lot of work. Kablammo (talk) 16:00, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

Images
The author of this article claims that the image of the "buried alive" promotion from 1989 is "own work", and I do not see an adequate release for use of the 1984 "in from the cold" advertisement. Kablammo (talk) 01:33, 10 September 2023 (UTC)


 * , can you address these concerns? Kablammo (talk) 01:45, 10 September 2023 (UTC)