Talk:John Holt (publisher)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 23:40, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I saw this article on the GAN backlog. I will start the review tomorrow. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 23:40, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

General
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 * Would prefer to change the place of birth in the infobox to Williamsburg, Virginia, British America – it is more precise.

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 * Change the occupation to Printer · postmaster, change the "Known for" to just "Journalism".

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 * Utilize the template in the infobox.

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 * Change the link for Virginia to Colony of Virginia in the first sentence of the "Early life" section.

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 * A point is missing at the end of the "In 1755 Thomas Clap, President of Yale College, invited Benjamin Franklin to set up a printing press in New Haven, Connecticut. Benjamin Mecom, Clap's nephew, was to operate the press to publish the paper" sentence.

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 * Would prefer merging "Family", "Later life and death", and "Societies and churches" sections into a new section called "Personal life and death".

Images

 * All are alright.