Talk:John Hugill/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 03:55, 25 August 2010 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this article for potential GA status. My review will be posted when it's morning where I am. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 03:55, 25 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I've decided to pass this article as GA - congrats! Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 14:19, 25 August 2010 (UTC)

Writing and formatting

 * The sentence about his marriage might fit better at the end of the first paragraph under "Early life"
 * "from 1921–1923" -> "from 1921 until 1923"
 * Magor or Mahor?

Accuracy and verifiability

 * Note 1 cites Evans and Miller, but the reference cites Elliott and Miller - which is correct?
 * Combine identical refs, ex. 5 and 10
 * In the last three entries of "Works cited", why is the middle Toronto not linked while the other two are?

Broad

 * Do we know anything else about his children and his later life?

Neutrality
No issues noted

Stability
No issues noted

Images

 * John Hugill.jpg - source link "expired"