Talk:John Mack (civic leader)

National Urban League
Are the Flint and Los Angeles Urban Leagues chapters of the National Urban League?Zigzig20s (talk) 21:52, 22 June 2018 (UTC)
 * It is.Zigzig20s (talk) 22:16, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

Alpha Phi Alpha
User:Evan Jordan: Do you have a reliable third-party source for his membership in Alpha Phi Alpha please?Zigzig20s (talk) 16:50, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

John Mack, member of Alpha Phi Alpha fraternity
https://mackes-lausd-ca.schoolloop.com/Johnwmack Evan Jordan (talk) 16:56, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * User:Evan Jordan: This link is not loading. Do you have another RS please?Zigzig20s (talk) 16:58, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

John Mack - Alpha Phi Alpha
Link is working. Retry. It's the official John W Mack Elementary School website.

https://mackes-lausd-ca.schoolloop.com/Johnwmack Evan Jordan (talk) 17:06, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

"other minorities"
User:Evan Jordan: What is your reliable third-party source for this please? It's not in the body of the text.Zigzig20s (talk) 17:18, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * The LA Times mentions "Latinos." I will add it to the article.Zigzig20s (talk) 17:21, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

John Mack - "other minorities"
https://lasentinel.net/john-mack.html Evan Jordan (talk) 17:21, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * User:Evan Jordan: Do you have a reliable third-party source for "Under his leadership, the commission became the "driving force" behind several LAPD improvements, including video cameras in squad cars to increase accountability among patrol officers, and the department achieving full compliance with the federal consent decree that had been in place since 2001." please? Sorry, I am not trying to be difficult, but I have nominated this article for Recent Deaths on the main page, and uncited content will stop that from happening.Zigzig20s (talk) 17:34, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

https://www.scpr.org/news/2013/08/27/38915/departing-los-angeles-police-commissioners-leave-n/ Evan Jordan (talk) 17:44, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * I can't find anything about video cameras in this article.Zigzig20s (talk) 18:01, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

John Mack - Federal Consent Decree
http://www.latimes.com/local/obituaries/la-me-ln-john-mack-obit-20180622-story.html Evan Jordan (talk) 17:45, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
 * This says, "Mack helped negotiate an end to the federal consent decree." That's not what you've added to the WP article...Zigzig20s (talk) 18:04, 23 June 2018 (UTC)