Talk:John Madsen (physicist)

Draft:J P V MADSEN
There is some content at Draft:J P V MADSEN that may be added to this article. Could an editor familiar with this topic please take a look? Brad v  05:24, 11 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Legacypac just merged everything into the article. Thanks, !

Should be a biography, not just a report on research endevors
The article ignores the first 21 years and last 13 years of his life. There should be at least a brief mention of things in these time ranges.John Pack Lambert (talk) 13:26, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

Fails MOS
I think I have made at least most subsequent references say Madsen, not his initials, which is the Wikipedia MOS standard. However some may want to check. There are also probably still some & that need to be replaced by and. The style of using the & to link lots of things needs to be revised, I did this some but there is need for more.John Pack Lambert (talk) 13:28, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

Excessive coatracking
This article has very excessive coatracking. I cut back a huge discussion of Faraday and a few others, but there are still other examples in the text that bring up things with no obvious link to Madsen.John Pack Lambert (talk) 13:29, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

Excessive abbreviations
There are lots of abbreviations in the article. It is not always clear what they stand for. This could be made more clear.John Pack Lambert (talk) 13:32, 6 January 2023 (UTC)