Talk:John Martin Finlay

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for this new article on a notable writer. A few tips - it would be better for some of the material in the "Academic years" and "Later years" section to be written as paragraphs instead of individual sentences (see WP:PROSELINE), and it would be helpful to tell the reader what he wrote about, what his most notable works were, his literary style, etc. which is discussed in the sources. Happy editing..

Spicy (talk) 14:25, 3 July 2020 (UTC)