Talk:John Neoptolemos

Finished excessive revision of the article. Additional independent sources have been added: news articles, website-citations, research articles including information about the subject. The career section has been broken down into three paragraphs and it has been revised for clear structure, readability and redundancy. The whole text has been revised for a neutral tone. Another COI statement has been added to draft talk page.

Article Streamlining
How to make this article publishable Thmspausch (talk) 02:42, 21 May 2023 (UTC)