Talk:John Philip Sousa Baton/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:46, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:53, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "After Sousa's death" After his death.
 * "United States Marine Corps" link.
 * "17.15-inch" approximately and then you give its length to the nearest 1/100th of an inch?!
 * Removed 'approximately'. Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:08, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "eagle, globe, and anchor " our article capitalises this.
 * "Vice President" and "Speaker of the House of Representatives" could be linked.
 * Do we know which White House lawn, there are articles...
 * I double checked, but the source just states "White house lawn". Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:08, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Non-English sources should use the  parameter.
 * The baton article is not linked from the navbox at the bottom, so either it needs to be added or the navbox needs to go.
 * Added in the navbox. Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:08, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
 * @ Done all, or replied above. Thanks a lot for all your GA reviews.  Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:08, 27 September 2021 (UTC)