Talk:John S. Walmsley Jr./GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 03:38, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:38, 3 December 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * Use bomber instead of bomber aircraft.
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Hyphenate anti-aircraft.
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Consolidate the paragraphs in the beginning of the biography sentence into one. Addd "
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Need publisher location for Ecker.
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * Operation Strangle link goes to the one in Italy in 1944.
 * That article also makes reference to the 1950 Operation Strangle since both missions were essentially the same thing against different targets. — Ed! (talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * If you linked in the lede, there's no need to link again in the main body, IMO.
 * WP:LINK says links should appear once in the lede and once in the body of the text. — Ed! (talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * DMY as US military article.
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk) 19:19, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Was the train shooting at the aircraft or were AA emplacements along the RR track?
 * Clarified. — Ed! (talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Made all the fixes. Thanks for your review! — Ed! (talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Made all the fixes. Thanks for your review! — Ed! (talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Made all the fixes. Thanks for your review! — Ed! (talk) 19:15, 6 December 2011 (UTC)