Talk:John Spike

Needs some sorting out
Not a priority for me, but this needs some sorting out. The fact that he has one son who happened to be 23 at the time this was written does not belong in the lead paragraph. I'm sure that is not the only bit of oddness in how this is done. - Jmabel | Talk 04:28, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Did a little on it, but it still reads more like a resumé than an encyclopedia article. And it doesn't cite its sources on the biographical material. - Jmabel | Talk 04:21, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Made significant changes to the article to address the concerns on the template messages including: updating time-sensitive information where needed, shifting to a greater degree of disinterestedness in the point of view, and increasing the number of references. 2 June, 2019.