Talk:John Triscari/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 01:42, 14 December 2013 (UTC)

I will have a look at this tomorrow.  Taylor Trescott  - my talk + my edits 01:42, 14 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Should the personal section be changed to "personal life" section?
 * ✅ Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Do we know where he was born?
 * No, damn it. I know where he lives, but not where he was born. I could just ask him, but that would be WP:OR. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
 * "but lost to the Canada" is the the needed here?
 * ✅ Deleted. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
 * The "Coach of the Year" stuff - who gives this award, and why is it noteworthy?
 * It is from the Western Australian Department of Sports and Recreation. While there are many awatfd for players, there are not so many coaches awards. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)

On hold.  Taylor Trescott  - my talk + my edits 22:58, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
 * OK, looks good.  Taylor Trescott  - my talk + my edits 15:41, 15 December 2013 (UTC)