Talk:John Vinton Dahlgren

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: I would suggest cutting down on details of Dahlgren's wedding in the Personal life section, as New York Times marriage announcements are examples of trivial coverage which should not be accorded the full weight of their normal journalism. The details of it being a "notable social event" are probably undue if other sources do not mention them. Otherwise, the article looks to be in good shape..

signed,Rosguill talk 01:03, 30 January 2020 (UTC)