Talk:John Yarra/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 13:59, 2 June 2022 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:59, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Images properly licensed
 * In the lede, 0 is a number
 * Rephrased. Zawed (talk) 04:23, 6 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Tell the reader what type of ship Cape Hawk is
 * Done, caught a typo in the name too. Zawed (talk) 09:59, 7 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Link drop tank
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 04:23, 6 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Yarra shot down two more Bf 109s on 18 May, although some accounts report one of these as probably destroyed rather than being a definite aerial victory. Add a note discussing these claims in more depth
 * Added some detail in a note. Zawed (talk) 10:40, 7 June 2022 (UTC)


 * It only had one action for the month Awkward
 * Have rephrased. Zawed (talk) 10:40, 7 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Spot checks made, no issues
 * , thanks for the review, I have responded as above and with these edits. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:40, 7 June 2022 (UTC)