Talk:John Zurier

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This draft needs all the direct external links removed. It also needs the huge lists deleted, or at least very thoroughly shortened. And a bit more actual content, stuff about the subject, would help. Maproom (talk) 09:28, 25 November 2015 (UTC)

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Multiple issues
The lede cannot summarise the main points, because there aren't any. The writing is obscure, self-indulgent, and simply fails to convince the reader of anything. Some of it even sounds contradictory. Valetude (talk) 22:47, 31 January 2019 (UTC)

Expanded lead
I expanded the lead a bit and added more details about Zurier's work. However, the lead still does not contain much information. Also, this article suggests that Zurier's works are minimal but Zurier is not part of the minimalist movement, something that I tried to express in the lead but is still unclear. YixQ (talk) 02:11, 4 March 2019 (UTC)

Split "Work" section
I split the "Work" section into two parts, as the original one was way too long and confusing. I split it into two sections about career and about style respectively, similarly to the page of Pablo Picasso. The section "Style and technique" is still confusing, and much of it appears to be copied and pasted with minimal changes. Feel free to remove or rephrase some sentences, especially to make the section more concise and easier to understand. Y IX Q ( T  ALK ) 05:09, 5 March 2019 (UTC)