Talk:John de Strivelyn

MILHIST initial assessment
A solid start. 14th. century Scottish warfare is a personal interest, so I found this interesting. Could be improved by more in-line citation on career (perhaps using the Cornell article mentioned but not cited?). Heavy reliance on Bain's callendar might bring suggestions of original research and it is recommended a wider breadth of sources is used to support this. Image-wise, it is sometimes helpful to have the subject's coat-of-arms if this is available. Otherwise, perhaps some images of castles mentioned in the text. Thanks. Monstrelet (talk) 18:55, 23 May 2010 (UTC)