Talk:Jolly Stanesby

NPOV dispute
The article reads like a very supportive biography, rather than an impartial and descriptive one. For example, the closing sentence of the introduction, "Despite now having shared residence with his daughter he will never give up until this law is changed" is far from impartial.

The rest of the article describes various protests the subject of the article has participated in, with quotes from the subject of the article, but the tone does not suggest impartiality, with an informal, supportive tone. Evanodell (talk) 18:36, 19 June 2017 (UTC)