Talk:Jon Corzine/GA2

GA Reassessment
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the reassessment.''

Result: Delisted. Legitimate concerns, no opposition or improvements made; Matters raised in the reassessment were not addressed. These matters will remain valid until the next GA Review, whereupon they must be addressed first. --Whiteguru (talk) 20:33, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

Starts GA Reassessment. The reassessment will follow the same sections of the Article. --Whiteguru (talk) 12:25, 1 July 2021 (UTC) Instructions: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_reassessment



Observations

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

HTML document size: 393 kB   Prose size (including all HTML code): 70 kB    References (including all HTML code): 199 kB    Wiki text: 110 kB    Prose size (text only): 39 kB (6444 words) "readable prose size" References (text only): 30 kB


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * The Lede is too short. There is a tag on this page to this effect.
 * Infobox is comprehensive.


 * Tenure section is excessively overlinked. See WP:MOSLINK
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * Reference 2 is a dead link
 * All links to Time Magazine are dead links. Run the Internet Archive Bot over this page.
 * There are seven citation needed tags on the page.
 * There are no references for the Electoral History tables.
 * Committee assignment section has a tag outstanding since 2019
 * every resident to enrol in a health plan and have taxpayers help pick up the tab for all the welfare low- and middle-income residents. In June 2008, state legislators voted for the first phase of that program mandating health care coverage and Corzine signed it into law in July.[citation needed]
 * Corzine was one of several United States Governors  and following in this paragraph is overlinked.
 * MF Global section is too big; (MF Global and their collapse have their own article.)(Corzine has a complete section in this article.) This section is too large, reduce it to three paragraphs. Current paragraph 3 is far too large and contains material that belongs on the MF Global page.


 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * It is meet and fitting that Corzine spent $62 million on his senate election campaign. This election has its own page and this section may be effectively trimmed back to three paragraphs. Too much detail, see WP:PROSELINE.


 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * The section during Corzine's tenure as Governor and Presidents Clinton and Obama is excessively overlinked.
 * Consideration was given to the scandal section, referencing Carla Katz. Neutral point of view and verifiability were examined and confirmed.


 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Page created 5 October 2003 by Academic Challenger
 * Page has 2725 edits by 1219 editors
 * 90 day page views has 30,676 views with an average of 337 views daily.
 * Page has had occasions of minor vandalism; Cluebot and other editors resolving quickly.
 * Page is considered basically stable.


 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * File:SenatorJonCorzine.jpg = This United States Congress image is in the public domain, due being a photograph of a (former) elected official (US Senate).
 * File:Jon Corzine.jpg = Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Generic license.
 * File:Corzine final.pdf = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported license.


 * 1) Notifying Editors:
 * Page Creator Academic Challenger notified;
 * Editor RFD notified;
 * Editor Anomalocaris notified;
 * Editor TonyTheTiger notified;
 * Editor Offenbach notified;
 * Editor WikiProject United States governors notified;
 * Editor WikiProject U.S. Congress notified;
 * Editor WikiProject New Jersey notified;
 * Editor WikiProject Biography/Politics and government notified;
 * A total of five involved editors and several WikiProjects were notified.


 * 1) Overall:
 * The Internet Archive bot should be run over this page and its references. Many are 404.
 * The lede section is too short and needs more content.
 * There are seven [7] citation needed tags on this page which need resolution
 * Material in the MF Global section is too large and needs to be trimmed; MF Global has its own page.
 * There is over-linking on this page. The Electoral History tables lack references.
 * An amount of work is required on this page.

for one week. --Whiteguru (talk) 06:33, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , I agree that the article would need significant work to maintain GA status. Suggest delisting it since it's been a week. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  07:02, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

Result: Delisted. Legitimate concerns, no opposition or improvements made; Matters raised in the reassessment were not addressed. These matters will remain valid until the next GA Review, whereupon they must be addressed first. --Whiteguru (talk) 20:33, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

<!--