Talk:Jonah/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 18:37, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  18:37, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (27.5%, but this is only because one paragraph is cited directly from bible in both article and source.)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅
 * Images appropriately licensed ✅

Prose Suggestions

 * Yahweh commands the fish to vomit Jonah out. suggest Yahweh then commands the fish to vomit Jonah out..
 * Yahweh again commands Jonah to visit Nineveh and prophesy to its inhabitants. suggest Yahweh again commands Jonah to travel to Nineveh and prophesy to its inhabitants.
 * which decrees fasting, sackcloth, prayer, and repentance. suggest which decrees fasting, the wearing of sackcloth, prayer, and repentance.
 * Even the king comes off his throne to repent. suggest removal; the king previously ordered the people to repent, whereas this makes it seem like he was the last to repent.
 * and demands for Yahweh to kill him unless this is directly in the source, id suggest pleads, as it seemed more of the tone to me.
 * it exaggerates the size of the city of Nineveh to an implausible degree[1][17] and incorrectly refers to the administrator of the city as a "king". you can remove the citation after implausible degree, as they share the same citation as the end of the sentence.
 * I am going to leave the citations, since the statement may be controversial to some and, without the citations, people might challenge it. --Katolophyromai (talk) 17:34, 30 January 2018 (UTC)


 * That is all my suggestions. Passing now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  15:06, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Also please fix ref#46, it's currently Ziolkowsi 2007 instead of Ziolkowski 2007. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  15:09, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Finnusertop has already taken care of this criticism. --Katolophyromai (talk) 17:51, 30 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Non-reviewer comment:, please address what is (in References) "Walton, Armerding & Walker 2005" but "Walton, Armerding & Walker 1985" under Bibliography. The ISBN points to a 1985 edition, but the linked Google Books edition is from 2017 and with an entirely different ISBN (ISBN 978-0-310-53196-8). What edition the page numbers are from, I have no idea. – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 16:09, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
 * I have now fixed the reference. --Katolophyromai (talk) 21:20, 30 January 2018 (UTC)