Talk:Jonah ibn Janah/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 16:35, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  16:35, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (10.7% is highest, due to incidental mirror in some phrases.)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅
 * Images appropriately licensed ✅
 * I will be passing the review now, then adding prose suggestions at a later date. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  14:47, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions

 * ibn Janah trained there under Isaac ibn Gikatilla and Isaac ibn Mar Saul before moving out around 1012 due to the city's sacking. suggest ibn Janah was mentored there by Isaac ibn Gikatilla and Isaac ibn Mar Saul, before he moved around 1012, due to the sacking of the city.
 * Other than the medical profession, suggest Aside from his work in medicine,
 * That is all my comments. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  07:39, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Adopted your suggestions. Thanks for the review! HaEr48 (talk) 20:52, 6 March 2018 (UTC)