Talk:Jonas Mouton/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crowz  RSA  17:58, 23 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * What verifies Mouton played as a defensive back at Venice High School.?
 * done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:01, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
 * What verifies The major high school rating reports evaluated him as a safety?
 * That is supported by the remainder of the fully reffed paragraph.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:01, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Shouldn't "Early life" be titles "High School" instead?
 * O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:03, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Per WP:ORDINAL, single digit numbers should be spelt out.
 * Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:05, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
 * You have consistency issues with spelling out numbers and numerals (i.e. he started eleven of the twelve games, a new career high with 11 tackles)
 * fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:34, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Using "v." is preferred over "vs." (i.e. "Bears v. Packers" is preferred over "Bears vs. Packers"
 * fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:07, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:Lead
 * Expanded to 2 paragraphs.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:14, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Please fix dab links
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:09, 26 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Result
 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: