Talk:Jonathan Groff/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good; images are free to use.
 * However, I would suggest adding a caption.
 * ✅ Added. KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "as the recurring role" doesn't sound right. Try rewording.
 * ✅ KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Certain claims don't need sources if they are already in the body of the article.
 * ✅ Removed redundant citations. KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "that is set to" "which is set to" or "set to"
 * ✅ KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "December 22, 2021" in the last sentence.
 * ✅ KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)

Early life

 * The first sentence needs a source.
 * ✅ KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * You can't cite IMDb per WP:IMDB.
 * ✅ Changed source. KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * That second paragraph is just a quote. Is it necessary?
 * ✅ Got rid of quote and integrated relevant information about religious background into first paragraph. KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Here and in other sections, change uses of "..." to "[...]" (visually pleasing).
 * ✅ KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The second-to-last paragraph is unsourced.
 * ✅ Added sources. KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The reference after "begin his career" is dead.
 * ✅ Found new source. KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)

Career

 * Add commas after "December 11, 2005", "May 19, 2006", "August 21, 2010", "September 9, 2012", "January 20, 2013", "September 20, 2013", "November 19, 2013", "May 25, 2014", "July 13, 2015", "September 17, 2019", per MOS:DATECOMMA.
 * ✅ Thanks! Wasn't aware of the this. KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The use of "musical" in the last sentence of the 1st paragraph feels repetitive.
 * ✅ Reworded. KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "filmed a first episode" doesn't sound right so try rewording.
 * ✅ KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The sentence ending with "in 2019" needs a source.
 * ✅ KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "Upcoming Projects" "Upcoming projects"
 * ✅. KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)

Personal life

 * This section looks good.

Filmography and discography

 * Per consistency with other GA-articles, each of his projects needs a source.
 * ✅ Added reference column. KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)

Awards and nominations

 * Every single award nomination/win needs a reference as well.
 * It would also make it easier to simply have a references column.
 * ✅ KlueMeIn (talk) 22:26, 25 March 2021 (UTC)