Talk:Jonathan Sánchez/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Secret account 15:40, 20 December 2010 (UTC)

Article needs some work before becoming an GA.


 * The lead needs to be expanded a little bit, give the seasons a bit more detail, and his playing style.
 * A subsection needs to be included about his playing style (only explains it's pitch repertoire), it's not that hard to find considering he's a starting pitcher.
 * enjoyed a fine start... tone, NPOV
 * After such an impressive performance... again tone
 * His performance went relatively unnoticed - I think it should be reworded, rookies who had one at-bat or pitched one inning that aren't a state of the art prospect goes relatively unnoticed.
 * It explains twice that it was his first Major League win, and it should be explained how the Giants won
 * Many of the sources cite San Francisco Giants when in fact those are mlb.com news stories correct them.
 * very well... tone
 * The word unfortunately a couple of times - reword, that's not proper encyclopedia language
 * for the first time in his career... unneeded wording since he became mostly a regular that season
 * His last start before going on the disabled list wasn't bad, though - personal opinion
 * Sánchez began having a career year - reword 7-6 record isn't a "career year"
 * Source doesn't mention a son

Ok good enough passed Secret account 16:34, 22 December 2010 (UTC)