Talk:Jonny Buckland/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DannyMusicEditor (talk · contribs) 21:54, 23 June 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * Remarkable.
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * I notice on the band's article that Buckland gives specific credit to the Stone Roses as inspiration to play the guitar. Including that same sentiment here would be useful.
 * b. (focused):
 * I don't think adding the Jay-Z and McCulloch guest appearances to the discography section are really appropriate, we should remove those. The discography is for more extensive involvement; I could perhaps hear the argument that since Jonny's own discography isn't big enough for its own that we could make a table involving the tracks he was involved with instead, but it's not appropriate to just list the albums. It gives the wrong idea if the reader didn't go to look at the body (and let's face it, many will do that).
 * Those are the songs, they just redirect to the album that they were on. Cherrell410 (talk) 18:47, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * I notice on the band's article that Buckland gives specific credit to the Stone Roses as inspiration to play the guitar. Including that same sentiment here would be useful.
 * b. (focused):
 * I don't think adding the Jay-Z and McCulloch guest appearances to the discography section are really appropriate, we should remove those. The discography is for more extensive involvement; I could perhaps hear the argument that since Jonny's own discography isn't big enough for its own that we could make a table involving the tracks he was involved with instead, but it's not appropriate to just list the albums. It gives the wrong idea if the reader didn't go to look at the body (and let's face it, many will do that).
 * Those are the songs, they just redirect to the album that they were on. Cherrell410 (talk) 18:47, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I notice on the band's article that Buckland gives specific credit to the Stone Roses as inspiration to play the guitar. Including that same sentiment here would be useful.
 * b. (focused):
 * I don't think adding the Jay-Z and McCulloch guest appearances to the discography section are really appropriate, we should remove those. The discography is for more extensive involvement; I could perhaps hear the argument that since Jonny's own discography isn't big enough for its own that we could make a table involving the tracks he was involved with instead, but it's not appropriate to just list the albums. It gives the wrong idea if the reader didn't go to look at the body (and let's face it, many will do that).
 * Those are the songs, they just redirect to the album that they were on. Cherrell410 (talk) 18:47, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I don't think adding the Jay-Z and McCulloch guest appearances to the discography section are really appropriate, we should remove those. The discography is for more extensive involvement; I could perhaps hear the argument that since Jonny's own discography isn't big enough for its own that we could make a table involving the tracks he was involved with instead, but it's not appropriate to just list the albums. It gives the wrong idea if the reader didn't go to look at the body (and let's face it, many will do that).
 * Those are the songs, they just redirect to the album that they were on. Cherrell410 (talk) 18:47, 24 June 2023 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:

Very nice work! Just a few short things.  danny music editor  oops 16:20, 24 June 2023 (UTC)


 * I didn't understood exactly what you want me to do regarding the Stone Roses, should I add what Buckland said on the style section? As for the discography section, I think including the track with a link to the album would be the best option, you said it yourself: not everyone will look into the article's body! GustavoCza (talk • contribs) 16:29, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Reference 291 in Coldplay - sourced to NME - says something about the Stone Roses being the main reasons Jonny learned to play guitar.  danny music editor  oops 17:39, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Added it to early life! GustavoCza (talk • contribs) 18:25, 24 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Passed.  danny music editor  oops 22:18, 24 June 2023 (UTC)