Talk:Jordan Williams (linebacker, born 1993)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:52, 20 November 2017 (UTC)

Will look at this article. Comments will be coming soon. MWright96 (talk) 20:52, 20 November 2017 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "Williams played in 44 games, starting 21," - Williams played in 44 games, of which he started 21, ✅
 * Wikilink sacks to Quarterback sack ✅
 * Do the same to practice squad ✅

Early years

 * Fix the redirect links to middle linebacker to Linebacker#Middle linebacker and nose tackle to Defensive tackle#Nose tackle ✅
 * "His junior year," - During his junior year, ✅
 * "His senior season in 2010, he played at defensive end" - this piece of text should read as In Williams' senior season in 2010, he played at defensive end ✅
 * "He committed to Tennessee in October 2010." - spell this out a bit more: He committed to play college football for Tennessee in October 2010. ✅

College career

 * Add the appropriate wikilinks to sacks and pass breakups ✅
 * "He appeared in ten games, with five starts," - reword to Williams appeared in ten games, of which he started in half of them, ✅
 * "Williams played in 44 games, starting 21, during his college career." - Throughout his college career, Williams played in 44 games and started 21 of them. ✅

New York Jets

 * "He was released by the Jets on September 5 and signed to the team's practice squad on September 6, 2015." - change the text highlighted in bold so it reads the following day ✅

Miami Dolphins

 * "He was released by the Dolphins on December 26 and signed to the team's practice squad 'on December 29, 2015." - three days later ✅
 * "He was released by the team on September 3 and signed to the Dolphins' practice squad on September 4, 2016." - the next day ✅

Personal life

 * "Jordan's sister, Janine" - please don't use Jordan ✅
 * "Jordan held the first annual Jordan Williams Skills Camp on July 14, 2016." - same issue as above ✅

That's everything I could find in my reading of this article. On hold until all the queries have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 07:18, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Done. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:49, 22 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Okay then. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:56, 23 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:58, 23 November 2017 (UTC)