Talk:Jordyn Huitema

Having a weird structure, much information was imparted, and has been nominated hairball apparent.
Having scored her first national team goal at the age of 16, she became the top Canadian scorer in the history of the UEFA Women's Champions League before she turned 20, and has been named as a potential heir to Canadian legend Christine Sinclair.

Do I need to spell this out?

"Having" should modify "she became" and yet the semantic connection is thin indeed.

Having ripped a double in his first MLB plate appearance, Ken Griffey Jr became a 13 time all star, ...

In nearly any online sports forum, this would be read as high satire. &mdash; MaxEnt 18:17, 8 August 2021 (UTC)