Talk:Jorge Alonso (footballer)

Recent GOCE Copy-Edit
Hello, I recently did a copy-edit of the article. There were a few areas where I was unsure of what was being referred to or I needed some information that was not already in the article. I am a lazy copy-editor and have left notes in the source text, but I will post them here as well. If editors could please fix those two sections, that would be appreciated. Remember to write the article for people that may not be soccer aficionados/fans and who do not understand some of the terms used. I have also changed the date style to a MM DD, YY format. Cheers, Drcrazy102 (talk) 05:25, 27 November 2015 (UTC)
 * In July 2010, Alonso joined Real Valladolid after agreeing to a three-year deal.
 * During October, after he scored in the last minute to help beat Celta de Vigo 3–2 also at the Estadio Nuevo José Zorrilla, manager Antonio Gómez admitted to his excitement.


 * Hello. First of all, the correct date template approach in the English WP id DAY/MONTH/YEAR, not MONTH/DAY/YEAR. About your doubts: 1 - that's why I wrote "however" (and you removed it), it implies he broke his contract with Hércules to move to Valladolid; 2 - I have already asked for assistance to clarify that bit of his coach being excited, I don't think it should even be part of the storyline but I left it stay out of respect for the user that inserted it.

Last but not least, I have tried to reach a compromise between your storyline and mine, please leave the current version be. Attentively, from Portugal --84.90.219.128 (talk) 18:48, 30 November 2015 (UTC)